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Great intro.

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Thanks!!

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Such a gripping first sentence. And then the way it turned out to be bees was brilliant.

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Thanks again. Glad you enjoyed the read. I think the writing got stronger as I slogged my way through the book.

Cheers

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Such a great opening line

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Thanks!!

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I read the first sentence and there was a sharp gasp. My first thought was that Peruvian drug cartel members had reeked havoc on a competitor. Then more aghast-ness at the news it was the bees...

Good one, Dougito.

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Thanks for the compliment!

Cheers

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I'm currenly fighting ants. With some menthe spray that promises magic. Ants win. Maybe they lactually ike menthe-and why wouldn't they? I do

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Interesting problem maybe squirter a trail of menthe out the door to lead the ants away out of the house?

Cheers

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