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ChazLB's avatar

I enjoyed it but still have no clue what I read.. Best I can figure it's got to do with a vacation in a Latin town. Poetic but a bit seriel.

EpicGonzo's avatar

Hey there. Thanks for the read. The post is a link from my novel: Of Pisco and Peru. I've posted many excerpts on here, serially, from the beginning, so you can check them out to get an idea of who the characters are and where it's going.

Happy New Year

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Michael Edward's avatar

This bit was amazing:

“The starboard side has branched out, from a tiny acorn follicle to pre-mullet sequoia, able to defy both gravity and moisturizing conditioners until the end of times. The left side, on the other hand, looks like the pathetic patchy pubic hairs on a mange-infected female hyena’s spotted clitoris.” —- your descriptions never cease to impress me. :)

EpicGonzo's avatar

I remember enjoying writing that. LOL. Thanks for the read and hope you are having a good holiday.

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Blake Nelson's avatar

Good stuff Epic!

EpicGonzo's avatar

Thanks

Happy holidays!

JimmyinTEXAS's avatar

Epic story...

Patris's avatar

Love your hair. And I like your aunt. Everyone needs at least one of her in their lives.

EpicGonzo's avatar

Gracias. The hair is a work in progress.

Happy holidays

Cheers

Patris's avatar

To you and yours as well

Antila H. Belist's avatar

Thanks for the story and the new spanish word, payaso, good word. Juicing and quickly(the vitamin c has a 30 secondish half life) drinking organic green cabbage works wonders on stomache issues. Do it somewhere ventilated though, or the smells...

“And the first rule. No bringing any valuables.”

Great rule!

EpicGonzo's avatar

Lol. Thanks for the advice. Wish I had it my first time in peru. Happy holidays

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Lois Thomson Bowersock's avatar

You are TOO Funny Gonzo!

EpicGonzo's avatar

Gracias. Thanks for reading